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Thinking

Thinking is a rather strange pastime. Back with Mother, I didn’t have time to think—there was always too much to be done. Either we were training our bodies to perform needed tasks or we were maintaining the City. But here, out in the wilderness of space, there was not much else to do but think. I stared out at the lights drifting by, wondering how many of those stars had planets, if there were creatures like us on them, if—
The mission was simple. The Ship was following another of the Fleet—this other Ship had been stolen by the mongrel animals of another world—a world unlike Mother, but a strange, heathen land. The Ship was programmed to follow the stolen one. We, the crew, only had to wait for our Ship to find it. It wouldn’t take long, the mongrels didn’t know how to program the Ship.
A planet flickered by, a swirling mass of reds and oranges. It reminded me of the clouds that covered Mother and of how the sky looked in a storm—
The mission was simple. No, I already thought about that. That is one of the things that made thinking so tedious, you often thought of the same things many times, until you didn’t want to think anymore.
©2009 ~coolchan
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Edit: Guess what I did in French today? I totally didn't invent an alphabet while we were supposed to be doing vocab work... <.<

Start of Stratagem! Wooooooo!

characters and story (c) me

Chapter 2 - [link]

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:iconx-saga-x:
Oooh, an interesting beginning! This is Noname narrating, right? :3 It definitely gives off the "I-don't-want-to-be-here" vibe, and you portrayed a sense of homesickness without being totally emo-baw-I-wanna-go-home. I'm excited for this~

...I need to catch up on Mali. D: I've been neglectful of late as far as reading goes. [/Shame]

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:iconcoolchan:
Yup, this is Noname narrating, but part of the novel will also be third person limited with Jackie. I'm glad I nailed the tone and that you're excited! <3

Yes! Go! Hunter becomes more mysterious!

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Marc could kiss her and hold her close and tell her it would all be okay.
Jackie didn’t see the troubled expression cross his face, notice the twitch of his hand toward his other wrist.

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:iconx-saga-x:
[/Wiggles] So very interesting~

Nyar, I shall do that. X3

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:iconkyonetsu:
I like the beginning as well :3 This person (it seems like a guy narrating? Apparently someone named Noname, hmm) is very interesting; I like how he thinks about thinking xD *goes to read chapter two*

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I half-ass a lot of things in life...therefore...I must be a butt cheek...
:iconcoolchan:
Yeah, he doesn't have a name officially, so I just call him Noname. It's more interesting than Sixteen.

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Marc could kiss her and hold her close and tell her it would all be okay.
Jackie didn’t see the troubled expression cross his face, notice the twitch of his hand toward his other wrist.

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:iconkyonetsu:
Haha a little :P That would be a little DBZ-ish

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I half-ass a lot of things in life...therefore...I must be a butt cheek...
:iconcoolchan:
I just find Noname more interesting. >>

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Marc could kiss her and hold her close and tell her it would all be okay.
Jackie didn’t see the troubled expression cross his face, notice the twitch of his hand toward his other wrist.

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:iconkyonetsu:
It is but I think a lot of people have already used that :|

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I half-ass a lot of things in life...therefore...I must be a butt cheek...
:iconcoolchan:
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I haven't. : D

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Marc could kiss her and hold her close and tell her it would all be okay.
Jackie didn’t see the troubled expression cross his face, notice the twitch of his hand toward his other wrist.

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